If I hadn't
decided to give my best when entering this school nine years ago, I wouldn't be
how I am. The fact that this school was way easier than my previous school also
helped, I had the opportunity to raise my grades and feel accomplished. The
first years of school here, I got to give my best, and little by little I
started believing I can do what I want if I am persistent and determined
enough. I have truly believed since then I'm intelligent enough to work my way
out of any problem or challenge. If I had slacked off during that time, I would
care less about school and decision making concerning my life. I wouldn’t
really be as thoughtful as I am.
If there
was a historical event that changed the world completely, it was when America
was discovered. If Columbus had never arrived to the New World, there would be
two completely different civilizations in the world. In the east, greater
technologies and a history full of war and ambition; in the west, civilizations
would have persisted and many cultures would've survived, creating a world
completely different to the one we live in.
Really well-written post. You used a lot of complex grammatical forms and applied them almost flawlessly, also very thoughtful!
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