Thursday, January 23, 2014

Homework

If I hadn't decided to give my best when entering this school nine years ago, I wouldn't be how I am. The fact that this school was way easier than my previous school also helped, I had the opportunity to raise my grades and feel accomplished. The first years of school here, I got to give my best, and little by little I started believing I can do what I want if I am persistent and determined enough. I have truly believed since then I'm intelligent enough to work my way out of any problem or challenge. If I had slacked off during that time, I would care less about school and decision making concerning my life. I wouldn’t really be as thoughtful as I am.

If there was a historical event that changed the world completely, it was when America was discovered. If Columbus had never arrived to the New World, there would be two completely different civilizations in the world. In the east, greater technologies and a history full of war and ambition; in the west, civilizations would have persisted and many cultures would've survived, creating a world completely different to the one we live in.

1 comment:

  1. Really well-written post. You used a lot of complex grammatical forms and applied them almost flawlessly, also very thoughtful!

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