It ain't a story completely. It is more a narration which I made.
Who says
monsters do not exist?
You must
fear, because whenever the light exits and the night enters; he appears. By “he”, I’m
referring about him, the one who no one knows.
He appears
when everything is silent, when you can hear the time pass by; when you can
feel how each second of the clock is synchronized with your heart pumping blood
through your veins. Sleep with one eye open, gripping your pillow tight.
Whenever
you feel the night is after you, you must say your prayers, and include
everyone in them. You’ll be free from sin, until he becomes you.
The things
he does, no one knows. He attacks you in your dreams; he chases you, gets you
and takes control of you. Dreams of war, dreams of lies, dreams of dragon’s
fire.
This
monster, who no one knows, is taking over you second by second, from the inside
to the outside. It’s just the beast under your bed; in your closet; in your
head.
So be
aware, care for yourself and for others; because you don’t know when the
monster will stop being an illusion and become you.
Interesting narration. Some of the lines sound a bit familiar, like I may have heard them in a song or something. I'm wondering what the monster is a metaphor. I like how you opened the story with a question. Overall, intriguing, though I think it could use a bit more development, in your own words. 8
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